Monthly Archives: March 2012

The Horse Thief

The bus ride home from school was a long and boring affair through the outskirts of the sleepy lake side town that I spent my early years. I was always the first kid to be picked up and the last one to be dropped off due to the location of my family’s small ranch. Our driveway was off a main highway, the only house for miles on this stretch of road and it was dangerous for the school bus to slow down enough to make the stop for me. I would stand in our driveway all alone each weekday, waiting for the bus in the cool crisp air. Eventually, without so much as a notification, the city dumped a huge load of gravel at the side of the road and planted a tall sign with a yellow school bus stop sign just for me. I remember how this angered me at the time since it blocked one of the small creeks that I loved to play in. I never stood near the sign because it was too close to the road and I was frightened by the speed of the cars. When I had told my mother about the incident, all she had said was, “I think what they did is cute!” Decades later, when I had driven by my old home on a whim, I was amused to see that old yellow sign remained, still stuck in its bed of gravel.

On this particular day, I was leaning against the cool glass of the bus window, mindlessly gazing out at pine trees when I received a shock. Tied to an oak tree in front of a slat-board side house were a silver grey mare with a white mane and tail and a smaller filly the color of brown sugar with a white star on her forehead. They were the two ponies from our mini-ranch. The next stop was only a half mile up the road. I exited the bus and marched back to where my ponies were.

It did not occur to me to simply take my animals and go. That was not how I was raised. I knocked on the door of the house and an unfamiliar woman answered. “Did our ponies get out of their pasture? Thank you for finding them.” I had added, “I need to take them home.” I was only seven years old, wearing my backpack filled with schoolbooks and a tom-boy corduroy jacket. I was short for my age and always felt that I lived in the land of the giants. Perhaps I still do.

The woman placed her hands on her hips and looked down on me with a sour expression. “How do I know that they are yours? Do you have proof?”

“But, they are mine…” I was not prone to speaking, especially to strangers, and I was at a loss. No one had ever doubted my word before.

“Not good enough. I need to see proof that they belong to you.” The giantess shut the door.

I left the woman’s property and trudged to my friend’s house a mile or two up the road. There I used the phone to call my mother. This was back in the days before cel phones, so you had to discover places to contact people. I explained to my mother that the ponies escaped our pasture and that a woman had them tied up in her front yard. Within a short time, my mother arrived with my younger brother in tow and the three of us returned to the slat-board house. The ponies were still there, grazing under the leafy tree.

My mother told me to stay with my brother before she ascended the steps and knocked on the door. The woman and my mother began to talk about the ponies. Being seven and not always able to follow what adults spoke about up in the lofty regions of the sky, I drifted across the lawn toward the animals. The little brown filly, Sugar, lifted her head and nickered to me. I heard a sharp voice. “You stay away from those animals!” I paused mid-step and looked back at the porch in alarm. Suddenly my mother and the woman were doing more than talking, they were shouting and poking their fingers at each other. At the end, my mother declared that she was going to call the sheriff, left the porch and grabbed my little brother.

Returning to my friend’s house, my mother used the phone again before we returned to the stranger’s house and parked in her driveway. We sat in our car, waiting for the sheriff to arrive. It did not seem long before the huge black and white pulled up beside our car.

“What seems to be the problem, Ma’am?” The sheriff was a middle aged man in uniform. The badge on his chest gleamed in the late afternoon light.

My mother wasted no time in telling him our predicament, pointing at our ponies that were still tied to the leafy tree. The sheriff and my mother walked to the house and soon all three adults were talking about the problem. The woman was stubborn, refusing to give up the animals and the sheriff and my mother interjecting their questions or demands throughout.

Since my little brother had been left in the car, I felt no need to watch him. Kicking a pebble, I wandered over to the oak tree where our ponies were still tied. This time no one stopped me. It was getting late and I worried how we were going to get the two of them home. Sugar butted her head against my chest and blew her hot breath into my hair as was her habit. I reached over to hug her neck and stroke her soft brown coat. Sugar was still too young to ride and far from her full growth. She stood about at my height and we were a perfect fit. When you are seven years old and as small as I was, you value a friend you can see eye to eye with.

I grew aware that the noise from the porch had stopped. I looked back and all three adults were watching me. The sheriff then gave the woman a displeased look and the stranger looked away defeated. There were a few more words among the adults and then my mother and the sheriff left the porch and joined me and the ponies.

The sheriff untied our animals and handed the rope to my mother. “Do you have a truck to pick them up with?”

I piped in, “Our house is just over the other side of the woods. I can ride Misty back to the barn.”

My mother was not happy with my solution, but told the sheriff, “My husband won’t be home for another hour. It is probably the best way.” Business concluded, the sheriff left us.

I left my backpack and schoolbooks in the car and used the ropes to create makeshift reins to guide our silver grey mare. Sugar was on a lead rope and would follow her mother. I rode Misty bareback all the way home, getting to the barn before dark. Along the way, I noticed that part of the fence in one of the pastures had fallen over. This was how the two of them had left our land. I put the two escape artists in for the night and made sure the gate to the paddock was closed securely.

As I walked down the familiar path from the barn to our house by the side of the highway, I thought about the woman and how I should not accept that people will believe me at my word even when I am telling the truth. I also gained a new respect for the law. I had never had dealings with the sheriff before and this incident created a favorable view of the police force to me. However, I believe that the most immediate lesson I received that day, as I had trouble walking home due to my sore thighs and backside, is that I would never again ride a horse without a saddle.


Author Interview: Sara King

I first was introduced to Sara King’s writing when I happened upon a draft her novel Outer Bounds on a writing review site that we both frequent. I wrote an editorial review of the first chapter of her book and asked if she would send me the rest so I could find out what would happen next. We’ve stayed in touch via facebook ever since. With her latest novel about to drop on Amazon, I thought it a good time to introduce this intrepid author to you here on No Wasted Ink.

Author Sara KingMy name is Sara King. Really. And no, I’m not related to Stephen King, though his writing was a very strong influence on me in my early years. I’m a 29-year-old born and raised Alaskan, who’s known since she was a toddler that she was going to be a writer when she grew up. Unlike all the other would-be astronauts, paleontologists, and fish biologists out there, no one really managed to dissuade me from that particular hare-brained notion, so here I am. To give you an example of how stubborn and single-minded I’ve been about the whole writing affair, when I was explaining to my agent that I wanted to release one of my series of books out of order, he laughed and blinked at me and said, “You’re not George Lucas, Sara.” And the first thing that flashed into my mind? “YET!!”

When and why did you begin writing?

I wrote my first documented story when I was 4. I know, because my grandmother dated Sammy the Snake and stuck it in a file folder in her dresser, about six pages long, with plenty of illustrated curly-cues of snakes that looked like twisty wads of poop. I say my first ‘documented’ because I wrote more before that, including Bob the Brontosaurus, which I lovingly stapled together while destroying my mother’s favorite stapler by standing on it when regular means would not suffice, but I’m afraid that my mother’s filing habits are not as complete, and Bob is probably a goner.

When did you first consider yourself a writer?

As soon as I decided that’s what I was going to be. I knew as a really young kid that I had to be an entertainer of some sort, and looking back, I judged all the positives and negatives of each entertainment profession with kind of creepily-mature decision-making skills. Writing, I decided, had the best collection of traits that I was looking for. It meant I could work from home—any home I wanted, anywhere—it had great opportunities for making a buck, it had huge pre-existing networks in which I could disseminate my ideas, it left me with no huge need to be under intense public scrutiny, and it was something I could basically teach myself to do. I chose writing over art because I felt writing had a bigger chance of making more money and going viral. This all when I was 3 or 4. From that point on, I started teaching myself to write, in earnest.

Can you share a little about your current book with us?

Alaskan Fury is about a Fury who, 3000 years ago, was told by her Lord to go kill a djinni. The Fury won the duel (think a sword-slinging, super-powered Batman going up against Shakespeare) and the djinni, hoping to prolong his life, submitted, binding himself to her for 3 wishes. The Fury raised her sword to kill him anyway, and, out of desperation, realizing she wasn’t going to take his bribe, the djinni cursed her never to commit violence (a Fury’s stock-in-trade). The book starts with 3000 years of bitterness and despair from their predicament already tainting their every action. It begins when the two of them finally hit rock-bottom, and is about the love story that develops from there.

Do you have a specific writing style?

Actually, yes. I am one of those freakish authors that subscribes fully to the Butterfly Effect. (i.e. The Pull It Out Of Your Ass Syndrome) This wreaks hell with my ability to edit or plot out a story, but it draws people along like nobody’s business. I’d say 1/100 of the authors I know write this way. Stephen King is a perfect example of a writer who writes like this. Basically, the characters will lead you along from beginning to end, so that you never get bored, but the plot doesn’t have perfect arcs and there are random tangents. I have always—ALWAYS—found myself unable to write based on a plot outline. I always take the tangents, always. For years, I agonized over it, but still couldn’t stop myself, even after I’d spent weeks on an outline…I’d throw it all away to take a single interesting tangent in the first 20 minutes because my characters said or did something that was unexpected. So, after about 5 years of struggling to write based on what I was told I had to do, I finally just gave in to that random-ass thrill-seeker part of me and stopped trying to conform. That was when I was 11. Immediately after, I finished my first novel at the age of 12. I think it was 145k words, or something like that, and you can imagine that I thought it was the cat’s meow. (shudder)

Are experiences in this book based on someone you know, or events in your own life?

Alaskan Fury takes place in (gasp!) Alaska. I was born and raised here, so I can get pretty detailed without someone screaming ‘hack.’ The characters are me. I’ll blatantly admit it. I pick a facet of myself and channel that baby onto paper, then switch POVs and pick another one. Though I often use what I have observed of other people in my writing, in Fury, it’s pretty much all me except for the dragon. The dragon was based off of my fiancé and his curious—but cute!!—hoarding instinct. Anything valuable or shiny is fair game.

What authors have most influenced your life?

I’m going to revise your question a bit to ask which ‘storytellers’ have most influenced my life, because I spent a great portion of my life (and still do!) analyzing great storytellers and a great story isn’t just told via books. So here goes, in no particular order: Tom Brion, George Lucas, Joss Whedon, Anne McCaffery, Orson Scott Card, Stephen King, George R. R. Martin. You guys, I bow to you. Tom Brion is my grandfather, who can spin a tale that holds an entire room enraptured, from whom I literally learned all the basics of good storytelling as I sat on his knee, listening to him tell tales of his misadventures in Alaska beginning when I was a wee ‘human bean.’ Oh, and I would totally grovel at Martin’s feet, if he would let me. Arya is my favorite character of all time, followed closely by Jaime. Now that man can write…

Who designed the cover of your book? Why did you select this illustrator?

My fiancé, David MacKey, did the cover. He’s normally a comic illustrator, but I kind of drafted him for this purpose because I love his art and I don’t mind being different. As to how I selected him, he basically selected me. The poor guy read my sci-fi novel Outer Bounds by random accident on the internet, felt compelled to look me up, had a little mini-freakout session with some of his friends when he realized I was single, then politely asked me if I’d like to chat. I think I told him to screw off a few times, but he was persistent…

Do you have any advice for other writers?

Your first novel is going to suck. Keep writing. Then write more. Then write some more. And then more. Do NOT get stuck on your first novel, thinking that’s going to be the best thing you ever write. It will be, bar none, your WORST. Keep analyzing your style and comparing it to what you like about other authors. Figure out how it ticks, then replicate it. Don’t concern yourself overly much with books on how to write. Most of them aren’t written by writers. Use your gut instinct as a READER to tell you what’s going to go over well as a WRITER, and then let all the egg-heads who write their 101 Simple Steps On How To Write The Perfect Novel In 5 Days—written by, I might add, people whose name you’ve never heard of—sell their books to the people who are insecure enough to think they need them. Storytelling is instinctive. You can teach yourself, esp. if you use a batch of first-readers to ‘shotgun’ their criticisms of your work and then analyze that, too. Clusters of comments citing the same problem generally means it’s something you need to address. If it’s a single comment here or there, it’s probably an outlier, so ignore it. Probably around book 4 or 5, you’re going to really start getting the hang of things.

Basically, with writing, everybody thinks they’re an expert, but it is my firm belief that the absolute best people you can get to help you with your work are people who hate to write, but love to read, and love to read the same types of books that you like to write. New writers are often very good at quoting the ‘rules’ without really looking much deeper and seeing the Grand Picture, and are hyper-critical and often wrong. When you’re looking for critiques, stick to readers who don’t write. You’ll get a better gut-instinct reaction, versus an ‘I read this’ reaction. Just because somebody with a couple of letters behind their name put one of their ideas down in a book does not mean it’s a good idea, but new writers, who are desperately seeking the Gospel that will transform their writing overnight into a huge success with little effort on their part, don’t have the confidence or experience to see that. That said, read Stephen King’s On Writing. You’ll love it.

Do you have anything specific that you want to say to your readers?

I had a world-famous agent for about 4 years, after which, I broke off and decided to do my own thing. Edging your way into the traditional publishing system right now is ridiculously difficult if you’re a new author. Therefore, I’m stepping into the bold new world of e-publishing all on my lonesome, but I expect to be a great success. If romance isn’t really your thing, keep an eye out for my sci-fi and fantasy series. I’ve had them written for years, but they’ve been sitting on my hard-drive for much too long, languishing as I waited for some traditional editor to take notice. I’m finally to the point where, since I know that I can make a decent living at this without waiting around with my thumb up my ass for some editor to notice me, I’m going to start publishing my own stories on Amazon. If you’d like to stay updated on this utterly brazen—and some say foolhardy—endeavor, you can find me on Facebook or Email Me. My first book, Alaskan Fire, came out at the end of January, and it currently has 18 5-star reviews. In my opinion, Alaskan Fury is even better, by far.

Alaska Fury Book CoverSara King was four years old when she wrote her first short story. Seventeen years later, she is currently working on her 16th book, the third novel in the Guardians of the First Realm Alaskan Paranormal world.  Sara lives in Alaska with her soul mate and biggest fan, David. 
Cover art by: David MacKey
Alaskan Fire: Amazon Kindle Store (currently at 18 5-star reviews!!)
Alaskan Fury: Amazon Kindle Store


No Wasted Ink Writer’s Links

There was an explosion of great articles to link to this week and I had a hard time choosing among them. From why you need business cards to dealing with writer’s block. I hope you like this week’s offerings.


Why You Need Professionally Printed Business Cards

How To Plot Without Plotting

This Business of Writing: Recordkeeping

When Words Wither: Dealing with Writer’s Block

In Love With Language

How to Market Nonfiction Books with Articles – Online and in Print

A Simple Novel Outline – 9 questions for 25 chapters

Writing Workflow – How to use ipad with Scrivener

3 Reasons to Have a Website If You’re Unpublished

Facebook Page for Authors and Screenwriters


Soundtrack of Writing: How to Use Your Ipod to Create Mood

I’ve been a participate of NaNoWriMo for the past five years. I was not successful in my word count goals every year, but it gave me the support I needed to start writing and to continue to write. In addition to learning about various software and hardware options to enhance my writing experience from the other writers, I also discovered the concept of learning to write while listening to music on your ipod. There are several advantages to this habit.

1. Social Convention. When you are seated in a coffeehouse with earbuds in your ear, people are less likely to interrupt you. The earbud has become a signal of “do not disturb” in public settings.

2. Blocking Out Noise. The ipod blocks out the general noise of the public place you are writing in. There are fewer annoying conversations to slip into your creative state and the sounds of the coffee bar blenders are blocked.

3. Mood Enhancement. Perhaps the biggest advantage, is that the music you choose creates a mood to enhance your writing. When we go to the movies, the soundtrack helps gives us the audience aural cues as to what is happening. The characters all have their own themes and different kinds of scenes are accompanied with different scores to create the mood of the film. We can use these same soundtracks to create similar moods in our minds while writing.

My local NaNoWriMo group has approximately 35 participates and I put up a poll among them to ask what their favorite writing soundtracks were. The majority of them are college aged writers and their age does influence their choices of music, but after reviewing their selections, I discovered a wealth of lush, emotive scores that are clearly above the norm. Here is the list of recommended movie soundtracks from that group.

Hans Zimmer’s Inception
John Powell’s How to Train Your Dragon
Dario Marianelli’s Pride and Prejudice
Howard Shore’s Lord of the Rings (all three movies)
Hans Zimmer’s The Holiday
James Newton Howard’s Peter Pan
Hans Zimmer’s Pirates of the Caribbean: The Curse of the Black Pearl
Michael Giacchino’s Star Trek XI
Mark Knopfler’s The Princess Bride
Various artists Down with Love
Hans Zimmer’s Sherlock Holmes I
Howard Shore’s Eastern Promises
Various Artists Garden State
John Williams’ Star Wars: The Revenge of the Sith
Michael Giacchino’s John Carter


Book Review: Beat to Quarters

Book Name: Beat To Quarters
Author: C.S. Forester
First Published: 1937

C.S. Forester was a former medical student who wished to become a writer. In 1927, he bought several volumes of The Naval Chronicle, that detailed the professional topics of the Royal Navy during the time of the conflict with Napoleon. Voyaging on a small freighter, he traveled from California to Central America and spent his time reading these books, soaking up all the articles on strategy, gunnery, and seamanship by professional seamen of that time period. By the time that his travels brought him back to England, Forester had plotted his famous novel about the mission of Horatio Hornblower, Beat to Quarters. It would publish in 1937 and would soon be followed by two more books, A Ship of the Line and Flying Colours. In 1939, all three would appear together in one volume as Captain Horatio Hornblower. In 1951, Beat to Quarters would be the source material for the movie Horatio Hornblower starring Gregory Peck.

The novel is about a secret mission to South America by 37 year old Captain Horatio Hornblower. The Admiralty has ordered the thirty-six-gun HMS Lydia and her captain to support a Spanish rebel in order to disrupt the Spanish naval presence in the area. This presence takes the form of a fifty gun ship of the line known as Natividad. Hornblower is ordered “to take, sink, burn or destroy” this vessel that vastly outguns his own ship. The captain soon discovers that the Spanish noble he was sent to support has lost his mind. El Supremo, as he calls himself, believes he is a god and will tolerate nothing but absolute obedience to his will.

Captain Hornblower manages to negate the situation of being allied with a madman and sets out to seek and destroy the Natividad. The Lydia faces this superior ship twice, once in a smartly done night action and a second battle at sea with the two ships exchanging broadsides in a battle to the death.

Weary of battle, Hornblower prepares to return to England. Stopping in Panama for supplies, he is persuaded to take on a passenger for transport, a Lady Barbara Wellesley. Finding the lady to be an excellent whist player and charming companion, the married captain suddenly finds himself engaged in an altogether different kind of battle, one that could sink his heart.

I fell in love years ago with the Horatio Hornblower saga when A&E created its mini-series based on the book series. Strangely, the mini-series did not cover what is considered the defining novel of the saga which is the first book written by Forester, Beat to Quarters. When I set about reading the books, I started with this one and then read A Ship of the Line and Flying Colours. After the main trilogy is read, the books can be consumed in any order. Most of the stories first appeared in serial form in the Saturday Evening Post before becoming novels, which accounts for their stand alone quality. Beat to Quarters is my favorite of the Hornblower saga and should not be missed. It will turn you into a true fan of historical fiction.

Where to find the Book:

You can find Beat to Quarters by C.S. Forester on GoodReads.